Foundation Portfolio - Draft Edit

Peer Feedback:

• Opening establishing shots need smoother transitions.
• Credits from opening shot.
• Consistency of transitions.
• After effects for Credits.
• Add different music. 
• Take out first shot of masked man.
• Music change.
• Cool Establishing shots.
• Maybe put the title at the end.
• Music to fade out in the end, go quieter.
• Like the font of the names.
• You've made the film more scary than what it is.
• Like the music for thee stablishing shots.
• Love the font title.
• Transition could match the music
• Cross-dissolve

My Thoughts on Peer Feedback:

I agree with alot of the Feedback that I have been given, and will consider taking them into account. I definitely will be changing and using the following:

• Changing/Using a different Transition from the cliche 'fade to black'. eg : Cross-disolve
• Changing the music when it comes to building up the suspence.
• Put the Credits in the Opening shots.
• Smoothen out the transistions.