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Foundation Portfolio - Draft Edit



Peer Feedback:
  • Opening establishing shots need smoother transitions.
  • Credits from opening shot.
  • Consistency of transitions.
  • After effects for Credits.
  • Add different music. 
  • Take out first shot of masked man.
  • Music change.
  • Cool Establishing shots.
  • Maybe put the title at the end.
  • Music to fade out in the end, go quieter.
  • Like the font of the names.
  • You've made the film more scary than what it is.
  • Like the music for thee stablishing shots.
  • Love the font title.
  • Transition could match the music
  • Cross-dissolve
My Thoughts on Peer Feedback:
I agree with alot of the Feedback that I have been given, and will consider taking them into account. I definitely will be changing and using the following:
  • Changing/Using a different Transition from the cliche 'fade to black'. eg : Cross-disolve
  • Changing the music when it comes to building up the suspence.
  • Put the Credits in the Opening shots.
  • Smoothen out the transistions.
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