Here is my Final Edit. The After Effects that I have used in my film include the following: Our Production logo that is shown at the very beginning of the film, this is counted as one of my after effects as I took time to Update the logo from the original to what it is now. As you can see the difference when you watch my Preliminary Task One and then my Preliminary Task Two. My Other After Effects used is the credits, when the names 'Niav Rice' & 'Pheobe Armitage', this after effect is called a slow fade animation on letters. An extra After Effect I added was a 'Glitch' On one of my actors, this one is not visible at first but you can definitely see the glitch, this Effect is used 0:25 seconds into the short film.
Question 4 by Mele Leaaetalafoou
Hi Mele
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 13/20
Question 1
- there are a few good points about what conventions you used but not enough detail is included.
- Keep your points short and sweet and 'to the point'. When talking about low-key lighting you start talking about your character and how the audience is watching a vulnerable character. It seems like you're just adding in words but with no real meaning to answering the question.
The question is asking what codes and conventions have you followed and what codes and conventions have you challenged (not used, on purpose). This needed a little bit more in depth analysis and also using terminology like 'iconography' or 'symbolism' for things like the knife.
Overall you need to be writing in more depth, detail and with a more sophisticated style, using all your film language and knowledge by this stage.
Q2
- this needs some actual research done into how you may distribute your film if it were a real media text.Saying 'it isn't a real film so I would just upload to Youtube' isn't answering the question.
You did a good job of thinking about the narrative and characters although you cannot say your film is shot in 'no one's point of view' as it is always from someone's POV. If it is not the victim or the perpetrator then it is from the point of view of someone watching it all unfold, a third person. And a lot of the shots are actually of the point of view of the kidnapper.
Q 3
- needs photos of things you learnt / images
- some good lessons learnt and some good critical thinking about what you can do better next time.
- one major thing was your sound that didn't work / record. This is something you need to include in your CCR.
Q4
- including pictures of equipment / screenshots of online things you used