You have evidence of some planning for your PT 1, although not in enough detail with enough examples of other work *(whether other films / pictures from Google Images / past pupils work), to get you a better planning mark, especially in the treatment section.
Storyboards look great. Well done on those.
There is a logo missing (this needed to be done as part of your planning). A logo needs to be though about, planned and a rationale given for your creative choices. Things like fonts/ size of writing / style / design etc, all need to be included in this logo plan. It is almost a mini project in and of itself.
Filming Schedule needs to be in correct format as per templates I've given you. It needs to be laid out as a professional run sheet for the day.
Hi Mele
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You have evidence of some planning for your PT 1, although not in enough detail with enough examples of other work *(whether other films / pictures from Google Images / past pupils work), to get you a better planning mark, especially in the treatment section.
Storyboards look great. Well done on those.
There is a logo missing (this needed to be done as part of your planning). A logo needs to be though about, planned and a rationale given for your creative choices. Things like fonts/ size of writing / style / design etc, all need to be included in this logo plan. It is almost a mini project in and of itself.
Filming Schedule needs to be in correct format as per templates I've given you. It needs to be laid out as a professional run sheet for the day.