Here is our brainstorm of our short film, We talked through this as a group, and one person drew out the brainstorm map.
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| Brainstorm by Porcia |
Here is my Final Edit. The After Effects that I have used in my film include the following: Our Production logo that is shown at the very beginning of the film, this is counted as one of my after effects as I took time to Update the logo from the original to what it is now. As you can see the difference when you watch my Preliminary Task One and then my Preliminary Task Two. My Other After Effects used is the credits, when the names 'Niav Rice' & 'Pheobe Armitage', this after effect is called a slow fade animation on letters. An extra After Effect I added was a 'Glitch' On one of my actors, this one is not visible at first but you can definitely see the glitch, this Effect is used 0:25 seconds into the short film.
Hi Mele
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Title for your movie?
You have evidence of some planning for your PT 1, although not in enough detail with enough examples of other work *(whether other films / pictures from Google Images / past pupils work), to get you a better planning mark, especially in the treatment section.
Storyboards look great. Well done on those.
There is a logo missing (this needed to be done as part of your planning). A logo needs to be though about, planned and a rationale given for your creative choices. Things like fonts/ size of writing / style / design etc, all need to be included in this logo plan. It is almost a mini project in and of itself.
Filming Schedule needs to be in correct format as per templates I've given you. It needs to be laid out as a professional run sheet for the day.