Rough Edit:

Preliminary Task One - Rough Edit:

Things I need to work on for my Final Edit:

• Edit out the sound of niav's bangle when it vibrates on the pole.
• My chase and killing scene needs a 'shift' in music/tension
• Make emphasis on credit

Positive things about my rough edit:

• Nice music
• Cool sound effects
• Good subtitles for people
• Nice gun shot sound 
• Music ties in well with the film
• Nice close-up shots

Add into Final Edit:

• Final Credits 
• After effects

My Response: 

I think that I'm gonna leave niav's bangle sound, as it is like diegetic sound, its something that takes place as part of the film, so there is nothing wrong with having it part of the film. I agree that I do need to add a 'shift' to the music and add tension to the film, and that I need to add more to the final edit.